Post a poem

PrincessPeach · Post by **PrincessPeach** » Fri Dec 19, 2014 4:23 pm

EquALLity wrote:

I was hoping for more than a "smiley face" response about your feelings towards my poem...!
So, what do you really think about it?

EquALLity · Post by **EquALLity** » Fri Dec 19, 2014 5:35 pm

It's great!
I mean, I don't agree with all of the points, like that being from Earth means anything.
But I get what you're saying and what your message is, and I think it's awesome!

What a selfish reason why not see how they die before you to take your first bite? Do you believe in life after death or are afraid to cry, scared you will empathize? If you don't want to see it then why do you eat it? Disassociate yourself so you won't feel it. The pain they go through and you think you need it.

I really like this part, because it's so true.
I'm sick of these fools who won't watch videos of factory farming because they just "can't stand to see the poor animals suffer."

Your poem is really deep and powerful, also!
(especially at that part quoted^)

PrincessPeach · Post by **PrincessPeach** » Mon Jan 19, 2015 8:09 pm

EquALLity wrote:It's great!
I mean, I don't agree with all of the points, like that being from Earth means anything.
But I get what you're saying and what your message is, and I think it's awesome!

What a selfish reason why not see how they die before you to take your first bite? Do you believe in life after death or are afraid to cry, scared you will empathize? If you don't want to see it then why do you eat it? Disassociate yourself so you won't feel it. The pain they go through and you think you need it.
I really like this part, because it's so true.
I'm sick of these fools who won't watch videos of factory farming because they just "can't stand to see the poor animals suffer."

Your poem is really deep and powerful, also!
(especially at that part quoted^)

Thank you so much I was thinking of taking out the "Bow your head down and ask jesus to forgive"
maybe use saviour instead... erm or just take it all out IDK!

EquALLity · Post by **EquALLity** » Mon Jan 19, 2015 8:15 pm

PrincessPeach wrote: Thank you so much I was thinking of taking out the "Bow your head down and ask jesus to forgive"
maybe use saviour instead... erm or just take it all out IDK!

You're welcome!

Hm, I think changing it to savior would be good.
I don't think atheists will discredit the rest of that poem for that one part.

P.S. Sorry I didn't do a poem; I pushed it to the side.
I guess I'm going to have to create one now, huh? LOL.

Maybe I can follow a template online or something.

PrincessPeach · Post by **PrincessPeach** » Mon Jan 19, 2015 8:18 pm

EquALLity wrote:

You're welcome!

Hm, I think changing it to savior would be good.
I don't think atheists will discredit the rest of that poem for that one part.

P.S. Sorry I didn't do a poem; I pushed it to the side.
I guess I'm going to have to create one now, huh? LOL.

Maybe I can follow a template online or something.

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What ever will give you inspiration!

Red · Post by **Red** » Mon Jan 19, 2015 8:46 pm

EquALLity wrote: http://www.jennymoxham.com/1_4_Factory-Farm-Poems.html

Here is a song I like: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IqLMirF6Z6E

JACLYNGLENN! Y U NO GO VEGAN!?

EquALLity · Post by **EquALLity** » Mon Jan 19, 2015 8:57 pm

PrincessPeach wrote: What ever will give you inspiration!

EquALLity · Post by **EquALLity** » Mon Jan 19, 2015 8:58 pm

RedAppleGP wrote:JACLYNGLENN! Y U NO GO VEGAN!?

I know right? She's a pretty big hypocrite on that front.

PrincessPeach · Post by **PrincessPeach** » Sat Jan 24, 2015 9:41 pm

EquALLity wrote:
RedAppleGP wrote:JACLYNGLENN! Y U NO GO VEGAN!?
I know right? She's a pretty big hypocrite on that front.

I thought she was a vegetarian ? The link is dead what's up with this ?

brimstoneSalad · Post by **brimstoneSalad** » Sun Jan 25, 2015 7:04 am

PrincessPeach wrote: I thought she was a vegetarian ? The link is dead what's up with this ?

I thought she should have given it up by now. Most people don't stay vegetarian for more than a year or two.

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